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Hair as black as night,
Skin as white as snow.
Looking at me,
With brown, emotionless eyes,
Appeared Snow White.
Eternally burned inside my mind,
She was the cornucopia of my dreams.

On a dark, fateful day,
I met the femme fatale again.
Accompanied with her,
Were seven, sad puppets.
There was one, however,
Which the girl cherished.
Brown hair and green eyes,
It looked at me with despair.
Wishing to save it,
I knocked it from Snow White's hand.
Disappearing with the others,
The beauty snickered at me.

Puppet in hand,
I chased after her.
Once she had heard my footsteps,
It was the end.
Limbs shrinking, and mind erasing,
I became another one of her puppets.
Snow White still lingers in the forest,
Manipulating people to her whim.
Are you truly the girl of legend,
Or are you Satan?
A lookalike princess,
And the foolishness of others.
Will you be the next
To fall into her trap?
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endlesscatpuns Featured By Owner Jun 17, 2012
Michael, why must your words always give me strong feelings.
It's not fair damnit.
Also this is really, really superb and I love it and I love you okay?
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DarkenedEarth Featured By Owner Jun 17, 2012  Student Writer
If you think so, okay.
And I'm hoping you get the subliminal messaging? It was fanservice for you.
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:iconendlesscatpuns:
endlesscatpuns Featured By Owner Jun 18, 2012
I got it. Trust me, I got it perfectly.
And thank you.
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Lee-Yoon-Sung Featured By Owner Jun 16, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
I reiterate, you're an amazing writer. ^-^
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DarkenedEarth Featured By Owner Jun 16, 2012  Student Writer
I'm a novice o3o
But thank you! C:
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Maximilian101 Featured By Owner Jun 16, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
A twisted fairytale...nice! :)
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DarkenedEarth Featured By Owner Jun 16, 2012  Student Writer
Thank you, I really appreciate it!
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Maximilian101 Featured By Owner Jun 16, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Of course! I'm a sucker for twisted fairy tales. You ever read the Brothers Grimm stories?
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DarkenedEarth Featured By Owner Jun 16, 2012  Student Writer
Not as of yet! But, maybe I should get to it soon! C:
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Maximilian101 Featured By Owner Jun 16, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
You should. They're the original fairy tales, and let me tell you, it's some pretty messed-up shit. :) Disney would never use them in their unedited form.
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